Comments on: Head Banging http://punix-gt.com/comics/2009/09/15/head-banging/ Adept Unreal Tournament Player, Cart Pusher Aficionado Fri, 30 Sep 2011 18:51:56 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: morgana http://punix-gt.com/comics/2009/09/15/head-banging/comment-page-1/#comment-107 morgana Thu, 17 Sep 2009 20:59:55 +0000 http://punix-gt.com/comics/?p=438#comment-107 actually, the "whack" panel is actually not so bad. When you bang your head things are going to go flying and feel chaotic....you probably dont need to fix much there. It is a little confusing tho. actually, the “whack” panel is actually not so bad. When you bang your head things are going to go flying and feel chaotic….you probably dont need to fix much there. It is a little confusing tho.

]]> By: morgana http://punix-gt.com/comics/2009/09/15/head-banging/comment-page-1/#comment-106 morgana Thu, 17 Sep 2009 20:56:52 +0000 http://punix-gt.com/comics/?p=438#comment-106 haha, nice. You've got so much going on here, it gives the viewer a lot to look at. Very good. i like how you used the little boxes of you and shannon in the second panel. I'm confused about vantage pt on the "whack" one...I am having trouble figuring out where we're looking. I think i know, but its hard. you've chosen a difficult thing to do tho, so its really not bad. :) Other than that, your perspective is looking really good. I like the guy looking at his watch. I also love the concept of a head banging wall. I like the look on punix's face at the end with his eyes all open. I haven't looked at a lot of anime, but it makes me think anime. Good job. I also like the look of her hair. I see a few problems. Shannon's arms look a little too short while she's typing and where she's taking the envelope you're giving her. looks like u need a little more upper and lower arm. I also think the comp monitor is a little too small. Most monitors are a little bigger than that. I like shannon's body movement when she's taking the envelope. It looks believable. I think this is one your best. You're really improving. :) haha, nice. You’ve got so much going on here, it gives the viewer a lot to look at. Very good. i like how you used the little boxes of you and shannon in the second panel. I’m confused about vantage pt on the “whack” one…I am having trouble figuring out where we’re looking. I think i know, but its hard. you’ve chosen a difficult thing to do tho, so its really not bad. :) Other than that, your perspective is looking really good. I like the guy looking at his watch. I also love the concept of a head banging wall. I like the look on punix’s face at the end with his eyes all open. I haven’t looked at a lot of anime, but it makes me think anime. Good job. I also like the look of her hair.

I see a few problems. Shannon’s arms look a little too short while she’s typing and where she’s taking the envelope you’re giving her. looks like u need a little more upper and lower arm. I also think the comp monitor is a little too small. Most monitors are a little bigger than that.

I like shannon’s body movement when she’s taking the envelope. It looks believable.

I think this is one your best. You’re really improving. :)

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