Comments on: Birds http://punix-gt.com/comics/2006/03/21/birds/ Adept Unreal Tournament Player, Cart Pusher Aficionado Fri, 30 Sep 2011 18:51:56 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: morgana http://punix-gt.com/comics/2006/03/21/birds/comment-page-1/#comment-34 morgana Wed, 20 May 2009 18:23:53 +0000 http://punix-gt.com/comics/?p=132#comment-34 I've already commented this one but I'm gonna comment again! That guy in the back running from the birds....he needs a space to live in. Drawing in something to help define that space would make it better I think. I dunno what....its ur comic....but draw in a horizon line....or a street, yard etc... I’ve already commented this one but I’m gonna comment again!

That guy in the back running from the birds….he needs a space to live in. Drawing in something to help define that space would make it better I think. I dunno what….its ur comic….but draw in a horizon line….or a street, yard etc…

]]> By: Morgana http://punix-gt.com/comics/2006/03/21/birds/comment-page-1/#comment-9 Morgana Thu, 07 May 2009 19:46:19 +0000 http://punix-gt.com/comics/?p=132#comment-9 lol. that was good. It seems that in a lot of your work you keep it pretty clean and minimalist...I like that. The lines tho are too light tho. I'd like to see them darker in more defining areas so that I can see the form better. It took me a second on the last frame to see the guy in the back running from the birds. It's too "quiet" I love his expressions too. Good job. lol. that was good. It seems that in a lot of your work you keep it pretty clean and minimalist…I like that. The lines tho are too light tho. I’d like to see them darker in more defining areas so that I can see the form better. It took me a second on the last frame to see the guy in the back running from the birds. It’s too “quiet” I love his expressions too. Good job.

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